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Script
BURIED SIN – by Misbaah Maahjabeen
SCENE 1
(Age rating certificate)
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SCENE 2
(Columbia productions)
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SCENE 3
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Long shot viewing the forest from a high angle going slightly low. (background music)
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SCENE 4
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Long shot of three girls around a campfire.(background music)
AMMIE
They were going through a dark..
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SCENE 5
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST
Long shot slightly from left angle of the girls around the campfire. (background music)
AMMIE
And then suddenly
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SCENE 6
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST
Mid shot of three girls around campfire. (background music)
AMMIE
Lightening flashed and thunder roared
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SCENE 7
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot over the shoulder view of second girls reaction. (background music)
AMMIE
Got out the car and moments later a dagger
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SCENE 8
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Long shot of girls around the campfire. (background music)
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SCENE 9
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Close up of girls reaction. (background music)
JASMINE
Did anyone else hear that?
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SCENE 10
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot of girls. Girl holding baseball bat. (background music)
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SCENE 11
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot of girls standing and hooded man appears. Girls scream. (background music)
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SCENE 12
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot of back of girl hitting hooded man across the head with baseball bat. (thud sound)
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SCENE 13
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST
Girl looks over hooded man’s body on the ground and checks his neck for a pulse. (Background music)
JASMINE
Oh my gosh he's dead
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SCENE 14
EXT.NIGHT. FOREST.
Long shot of girls standing around hooded man's body. (background music)
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SCENE 15
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot of girl grabbing the other girl. (background music)
FAYE
What do we do?!
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SCENE 16
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Close shot of girl. (background music)
Close shot of girl. (background music)
AMMIE
We'll bury the body.
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SCENE 17
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Long shot of girls digging a hole with bare hands. (Background music)
TAGLINE
Some things don't stay buried
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SCENE 18
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
Mid shot of girls carrying hooded man. (Background music)
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SCENE 19
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST.
long shot moving shot of forest ground.
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SCENE 20
BLANK SCREEN
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SCENE 21
INT. DAY. BEDROOM.
Ammie looks up. (soundtrack 1 begins)
TAGLINE
Janice Salome
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SCENE 22
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
last year
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SCENE 23
EXT. DAY. STREET.
Jasmine looks around.
TAGLINE
Siobhan Walker
Siobhan Walker
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SCENE 24
INT. DAY. LIVING ROOM.
Faye looks down
TAGLINE
Sofia Bojudo
Sofia Bojudo
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SCENE 25
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
Three friends
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SCENE 26
INT. NIGHT. LIVING ROOM.
Mid shot of two girls arguing.
AMMIE
What are you doing here?
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SCENE 27
INT. DAY. LIVING ROOM.
Mid shot of two girls arguing.
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SCENE 28
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
Buried a secret
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SCENE 29
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
And now
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SCENE 30
INT. NIGHT. LIVING ROOM.
jasmine opening letter.
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SCENE 31
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN.
Mid shot of Jasmine walking towards Faye and Ammie.
Jasmine
Somebody knows
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SCENE 32
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN.
Mid shot of Ammie reading letter.
AMMIE
I know your secret? ooo
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SCENE 33
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN.
Mid shot of Ammie.
AMMIE
For all we know
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SCENE 34
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN
Mid shot of Ammie and Faye
AMMIE
It could be about anything
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SCENE 35
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Close shot of the back of a hooded man
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SCENE 36
EXT. NIGHT. GARDEN.
Long shot high angle view of the three girls looking up.
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SCENE 37
EXT. NIGHT. STREET
Car headlights turn on.
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SCENE 38
EXT. NIGHT. STREET.
Car speeds towards camera.
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SCENE 39
INT. DAY. BEDROOM.
Mid shot of Ammie.
AMMIE
You were almost killed
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SCENE 40
INT. DAY. BEDROOM.
Camera looks down at Jasmine who is sitting down with bruised face.
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SCENE 41
INT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Mid shot of Faye.
FAYE
I got this
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SCENE 42
INT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Close shot of Faye holding a map.
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SCENE 43
INT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Mid shot of Faye and Ammie.
Mid shot of Faye and Ammie.
AMMIE
It's a map
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SCENE 44
INT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Mid shot of Faye.
FAYE
That's where we buried him
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SCENE 45
EXT. NIGHT. STREET.
Mis shot of Ammie and Jasmine walking.
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SCENE 46
EXT. NIGHT. ALLEYWAY.
Over the shoulder mid shot of Ammie and Jasmine.
AMMIE
We've got to tell someone
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SCENE 47
EXT. NIGHT. ALLEYWAY.
Over the shoulder mid shot of Ammie and Jasmine.
JASMINE
It was an accident
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SCENE 48
EXT. NIGHT. ALLEYWAY.
Over the shoulder mid shot of Ammie and Jasmine. (soundtrack 1 ends)
AMMIE
It was murder
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SCENE 49
INT. DAY. KITCHEN.
Close shot of eyes hidden behind blinds.(soundtrack 2 begins)
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SCENE 50
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN.
Mid shot of back of Ammie washing dishes. (bang sound)
AMMIE
Hello?
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SCENE 51
BLANK SCREEN
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TAGLINE
He's back
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SCENE 52
INT. NIGHT. STAIRCASE.
Hooded man walking up the stairs.
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SCENE 53
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
For revenge
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SCENE 54
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN.
Close shot of back of hooded man holding a knife.
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SCENE 55
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN
INT. NIGHT. KITCHEN
Mid shot of Ammie, Faye and Jasmine looking at eachother.
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SCENE 56
EXT. NIGHT. GARDEN.
Long shot birds eye view of girls standing.
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SCENE 57
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Medium close up of hooded mans back.
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SCENE 58
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Medium close up of hooded mans side view.
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SCENE 59
EXT. NIGHT. STREET.
Long shot of Ammie running towards camera.
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SCENE 60
EXT. NIGHT. STREET.
Long moving shot of Ammie running towards the house
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SCENE 61
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Ammie screaming.
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SCENE 62
EXT. DAY. GARDEN.
Birds eye view of hooded man walking.
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SCENE 63
INT. DAY. STAIRCASE.
Mid shot of Jasmine holding knife and stepping back.
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SCENE 64
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Over the shoulder mid shot of Jasmine and hooded man.
JASMINE
Oh my gosh it was you
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SCENE 65
EXT. NIGHT. HOUSE.
Camera moves from Jasmine to Ammie.
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SCENE 66
EXT. NIGHT. STREET.
Close shot of Ammie looking around.
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SCENE 67
EXT. DAY. ALLEYWAY.
Long shot of back of Jasmine running away whilst the camera runs after her.
Long shot of back of Jasmine running away whilst the camera runs after her.
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SCENE 68
EXT. DAY. ALLEYWAY.
EXT. DAY. ALLEYWAY.
Long shot of Jasmine running out of alleyway towards the camera.
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SCENE 69
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
From the makers of scream
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SCENE 70
BLANK SCREEN
TAGLINE
Buried sin
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SCENE 71
INT. NIGHT. LIVING ROOM.
Close shot of pair of legs and arm holding a knife and aiming it towards the camera.
Close shot of pair of legs and arm holding a knife and aiming it towards the camera.
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SCENE 72
BLURB (soundtrack 2 fades out)
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Recce
Positive: plenty of room to shoot and quiet secluded area with hardly any random people passing through
Negative: uneven and cluttered ground can be dangerous to run on
Solution: mark out on floor wherever it is safe to walk on and move any sharp objects out of the way
Location: external - night - bridge
Positive: people unlikely to be on the bride and it is safe and stable
Negative: can be noise and lots of people nearby due to being next to a car park
Solution: film during times when people have most likely finished work and gone home
Positive: open wide space to shoot, organise right setting and get various angles
Negative: random people may be walking by
Solution: shoot during later time when people are most likely to be inside
Positive: small and secure area with unlikely chances of anybody being nearby
Negative: dangerous grounds to run on and people are likely to be passing by
Solution: move away clutter and wait for people to pass by before shooting
Positive: small and secure area with unlikely chance of anybody being nearby
Negative: can be difficult to form campfire due to bad weather conditions, also lighting will make it difficult to shoot properly
Solution: use dry wood to make campfire and use lighting and appropriate camera settings to capture image properly
Audience research - Survey results
What is your gender?
Although my target audience is not gender specific and can be enjoyed by both genders, my movie does revolve around an all girl cast therefore it is more likely to be watched by females.
How old are you?
My target audience age group is 16-24 since that is the age group I can mostly relate to and horror movies are also aimed at that age group.
What genre do you think this movie is?
My genre is clear to my audience from the proposal, so the movie trailer should also be clear and precise for my audience to understand.
Does the set-up of the movie build a good story?
Everybody agreed that my set-up built and good story and this is a good thing for me since the set-up is a big part of my trailer.
How interesting is the plot?
Nobody finds my movie plot not very interesting so that is a good sign to go. My target audience is happy meaning they are likely to watch.
Do you think the turning point is intense enough?
Most of my audience felt that the turning point was intense enough to generate an effect upon them. The turning point is very important as is an opportunity of shock and revelation. For those who selected 'no' could still be surprised when it is put together.
How do you feel about the ending?
Everybody was more then pleased with my ending which means I can continue as planned. Although people agreed upon the ending, I asked for further suggestions.
What ending would you like to see?
Most people were okay with my ending and a few had good suggestions but since my trailer will not feature the ending as that will be a spoiler, it will remain a mystery to me and my audience.
Movie title
I did an additional survey for find out what movie title my audience would suit with my proposal. As the most popular choice is 'Buried Sin', this is my movie's title.
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